Reality Knocking At My Door.
Observing everything and saying nothing
Call that a template for a discreet being
Reality has never been shy of showing up
Even the blind can see it when it appears
Time flies with no wings even the birds of the air dare not to compete
Making hay while the sun shines till sunset
The journey is long, with ups and downs,
We stumble and fall, but we must rebound,
The road to success, it's never easy,
But with hard work and faith, we can make it breezy.
Funny how we make our choices, with careful thought,
But life's unexpected twists, cannot be bought,
We set our goals, with a clear intention,
But the path we take, may need a revision.
Sometimes we stumble, and fall from grace,
Our plans and dreams, gone without a trace,
But in the midst of uncertainty and strife,
We learn to adapt, and live a new life.
With each achievement, a smile on our face,
A sense of pride, a feeling of grace,
We've fought the fight, and won the race,
And we'll keep moving forward, at our own pace.
Since reality is knocking at the door
I have no choice than to open up
So let me embrace reality, with open arms,
And face its challenges, with all my charms,
For in the midst of struggle, I can find my strength,
And in the midst of life, I can find my true length.
What a beautiful and inspiring poem about the journey of life!
You remind your readers that success does not come easy or cheap but with determination, faith and hard work in the midst of struggles. I love the positive vibes! Nice. !PIZZA 🙂
Yeah right ! In life you just have to keep fighting to keep your place in a rightful position. Thanks for engaging and stopping by.
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Hey @typebox, I loved this poem 😀, so I have taken the boldness to pick it apart and dig into it to share with you my analysis of it:
This poem is a reflection on life and its ups and downs. The author makes a metaphor about the reality that knocks on his door and how he decides to open it and face its challenges.
I find that the poem has a good combination of emotions such as struggle, adaptation, and achievement that are intertwined and make the poem read smoothly.
In addition, the author plays with the idea that life is not always easy and that despite the downfalls, you can always make it through. The final reflection on finding true length in the midst of life is very well-thought-out and closes the poem nicely.
Overall, it is a thoughtful and motivational poetic work that urges the reader to move forward and face reality head on.
Congratulations on your excellent work, and thank you for sharing it with us!
Best regards.
You really did justice at expressing what the whole idea of the poem is . Sometimes we really do not know our true potentials until we are put through a test . I'm glad you could relate and connect and I really do appreciate you for stopping by . Have a blessed day!
I love this poem so much, firstly I love the rhyming scheme you did, it makes it enjoyable to read, secondly how we need to open up to reality and face the real world.
Thanks for checking my poem out and engaging me , it really gives much encouragement vibes . Thanks once again!
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