RE: A heart shopping

An interesting take on the prompt, @rare-gem, although the extensive use of dialogue slowed the pace of the story substantially. Be careful as this can turn a potentially good story into a tedious one. Unfortunately, the conversation also came across as being rather stilted and formal, and therefore didn't flow naturally. I recommend that you edit your work for simple spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors going forward if you wish to secure higher curation on your submissions.