RE: WHEN HOPE LEADS THE WAY
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This is a delightful story, with colorful characters, well described, and vivid scenes that come to life on the page.
We suggest that you change 'faithful' in the first line, to 'fateful', which is surely what you intended.
Effective writing, @favourolayinka.
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