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-Very nice story! A Human fell in love with a ghost! Hehe..May God bless you on this..all the glory be to him..In Jesus name! Amen!πŸ™πŸ˜‡

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Hi @czander. Welcome to The Ink Well!

Now that you're here, please have a look around and get to know our community. Here are a few tips for getting acquainted:

  • Be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of the community home page, and check out our FAQ about The Ink Well.
  • We accept two kinds of short stories in The Ink Well: fictional stories and creative nonfiction stories.
  • You can find some great articles on fiction story writing in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
  • You can find information about what we are looking for in creative nonfiction stories in this post.

And please be sure to engage in the community by reading and commenting on the work of other community members. We ask everyone who post in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published.

Your story is well-written and interesting, and we look forward to reading more of your stories. Again, Welcome!

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I'm on the edge of my seat reading this. I feel sorry for Noel for not seeing Anita again. I like your story.

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Maybe he fell in love with a ghost or it was just an illusion, I feel sad for Noel, I wish he would find Anita again. This was so beautiful to read.

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Yes! Produce by his mind maybe.., thank you for appreciating Ma'am @amiegeoffrey God bless you!πŸ™

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This story seemed so real, I enjoyed every bit of it

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All he could think about is the girl, wow is she that pretty, guess noel should stop thinking about love

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A beautiful ghost😁 Thank you Ma'am @fredaig God bless you!πŸ™

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Thank you for thanking me ☺️

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You are welcome! God bless!πŸ™

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So sad, he must have been hallucinating, so bad he couldn't have his way with the girlπŸ˜‚.

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An interesting story, but there were a few things missing making it make a little more sense. Otherwise the story is very intriguing and keeps the reader in suspense.

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Sometimes the missing things leads to the completion of the story! Thank you @ricardo993 God bless you!πŸ™

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So he was sleepwalking? Or under some spell? Not many people write this much dialogue so this was interesting to see. To me... the linking pieces in between the dialogue almost read like stage directions in a play.

So you are a junior high schooler in the Phillipines? What's school like over there? Our schools in the UK start at 08h45 and end at 15h15 each day. How do yours compare? Similar timeframes or do you have shorter or longer school days over there. Do you study creative writing or drama at school by any chance?

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I go to school every Mondays and Wednesdays only! Because we are back to blended learning again because of the hot weather condition here in our country. I love to write poems, painting, drawing, song lyrics writing, essays(English & Filipino languages) and in school we also have stage play, broadcasting, even cooking. Enhancing music, arts and dancing skills too. Thank you for appreciating my work!😁 god bless you!πŸ™

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